On Wednesday we had our 100th day of school. Panthers class had a range of activities to celebrate this fact, involving doing certain tasks within 100 seconds and making Lego Movie animations with 100 frames.
The children really impressed me with their poetry skills this week. They created their own little booklet based on a film called paraphernalia. The learnt how to write haiku, shape, acrostic and limerick poetry.
Check out the pictures of all this below.
Mr Hall
P.S. If anyone has any old (but still working) water pistols at home, would you send them in please as I need to try some out for a future school project.
Tarmac Truck Safety Talk
100th Day
Poetry skills
500 word stories
Below are all of the children's 500 word stories
The mystery behind bad dreams by Keira
One crispy
Friday morning Zoey was waiting for her two best friends for a giant sleepover.
Awhile
later, Squeaker and Sophie pressed on the doorbell. “YAY THEIR HERE!” chanted
Zoey.
“WOW”
shouted Squeaker and Sophie with barely no breath because Zoey squished them
with a rigid hug. “I have knitting inside so we can make some scarves.
Finally the
girls came in and dumped their bags down on the spotless fluff covered carpet.
The three
girls started their knitting and decided to multitask and watch their favourite
film (that they watch all the time.)
Near to 2 o’clock
in the afternoon Zoey, Squeaker and Sophie finished their lunch. They
frantically finished the skin peeled apple and a juicy orange.
After a few
minutes had pasted the girls went out to play in the garden. “Be back at 4 or
half 4 if you want to go clothes shopping.” Said Jessica’s. (Zoey’s mum.)
Zoey
Squeaker and Sophie felt adventurous and decided to go in to the dark gloomy
forest of doom.
As they entered
the forest they were surrounded by eary crooked trees. SNAP! Everybody fell
silent. What was going to happen? The three girls were rigid.
A tear trickled
down Squeakers soft face she cuddled up with her glistening eyes shining like a
diamond.
The three
girls snuggled up in a nest inside a towering tree. They squirmed and squinted
in the small soft cosy nest.
“ROAR!!!” roared
a horrifying animal.
“AHHHHH!” shouted the girls in an alarming screech.
They felt a
hand pick them up and then they
suddenly woke up in a soft feathery blanket. “Its okay” whispered a smooth
voice.
What was
this strange thing that was happening to them? Were they going to get
hurt? “HELPP!” screamed the girls.
There was a
strange shadow of a tall person on the pink box shaped wall.
One child lost
Where can the others go?
Nowhere to run
Nowhere to hide.
The two
girls left were Squeaker and Sophie what could they do to get Zoey back. The
girls suggested to make a plan to solve the mystery of the bad dreams. They were
up for it.
The plan was
being drawn by Squeaker and the writing was being done by Sophie. This plan was
going to be the plan of friendship and heart-warming people but mostly because
they needed to know the mystery behind bad dreams and what makes them bad.
“Girls are
you okay you sound like your panicking?” said Jessica’s calming voice from the
kitchen. “No we’re fine” answered the girls in hesitation.
“We need to
sort it we can’t just plan it we need to do it” said Sophie. As soon as
possible the girls ran down stairs as fast as the wind and went mystery
solving.
“AHH!”
shouted Squeaker.
Two children gone
One left to steal
What will happen?
Will they live or die?
Sophie was
curious and anxious. What was going to happen to her?
Zombies in Spaceland by Koley
A.j was in the cinema with his friends about to
watch Spaceland but then the screen turned in to a white portal and his friends
in. They are in a film called Zombies in Spaceland.
“Oh no this is only scene one,” said AJ.
“This is
very terrifying we have to kill them,” sais Sally.
“But we need guns if we want to kill them zombies”
said Andre.
“Oh I’ve got a gun” said Pointdexter.
A.j is going to go through the gate they cant
because there is to much zombies around them they need to shoot the zombies so
A.j got a gun called the nv4 he killed louds but then after scene 1 A.j got
puzzled by how much zombies there were.
Scene 2
there is to much zombies for them but they shot them down but then A.j has
4,000 dollars’ so he opens a door to a place called polar peak it is a really
cold for them.
So they brought a gun called the Rpr this a amazing said A.j his gun was really
good. So his friends had lots of money so they opened another gate and the place was called jorney into space
and there was another gun but they didn’t buy the gun. 10 scenes later it is
know scene 13 said A.j there is a lot more zombies then scene two said Andre. I
need ammo said Andre oh there is a max ammo who needs it said Andre I need it
ok said Andre oh yea baby I in with the ammo these zombies are going down we
need to get huff to get more health so we can survive all these zombies.
They are sliding across
the floor towards the perk huff. On the way to huff n tough, Andre buys the
Volk.
He shoots them in the head
and earned some more money. So he
activated the portal and went through the portal to safety we have only 1 more
portal to go through intil pac is open we
need to go through the portal to the pac a punch so are guns get better then
the brute will die no the brute is hear go through the portal so we can make
are guns better so we can kill the brute easyer it is going to be hard to get
there when the brute has spawned a Kepler system so we will have to run past
the brute then go through the portal then gets the pac our guns then kill the brute.
Portal is write there so
run then activate the portal so we can go through the portal then pac our guns yes thets go pac our guns go back
through the portal the brute is dead baby oh there is a alien boss help me kill
him yes oh there is three guns they are called face melter head cutter and
shredder the ufo has just blown up there is a soul key.
The underwater mansion by Harry
One sunny
morning I woke up and there where rats on top of me. So I get my shot gun and
scared them away, After that I notice that I am in a under water mansion.
There were
fish and sharks coming towards me. I get scared; I scream for help but no-one
can hear me.
A few hours
later
Boats came
rushing past I‘m still scared.
I have no
food or drink.
I is now
going to his garage. Ah yes…
There is a
wamborghini. I go to take it for a test drive. There is a red button I have to
press that transforms into a submarine. I take the Wamborghini for a drive. I
hear a, beep noise so I jump out of the car and when I turn around I see it
blow up so I heed back to the garage.
Ah no a shark is coming towards me and it try’s to bit
in the car, and I hear a beep nose in the car jump out of the car. In the background
there is a rat in the boot of the car and it goes karaka boom!!!!!!!.
I’m now heading back to my under water mansion. The is
a shark trying to break into the wall so I get my guitar and hit it no its
heard and it was even more angry then it was at the start.
The next day I see a scuba-diver who saves my life
1 hour later
I say thanks for saving my life and I notice that who
had saved my life. I congratulate
Roman Atwood for his 11 million
Subscribes.
A have a present for you roman a Audi r8 v10 plus so I
go and by him it from the Audi shop and he had to sing some millions of them.
So when we get back from the Audi shop. I now tell Kane what I got him I got
him a six-wheel quad bike, and he drive it over his new ramps and he loves it.
I now tell Noah what I got him. I said that I got him
that we will go out and he can choose anything
that is under 1000 pounds and he choose than I would he choice than I
would and he choose the I-phone 7.
When we get back to Roman’s house I told Brittney what
I got her a weightlifting set.
A week later, Roman and I went to the Audi store and
we got his Audi R8 V10+.
The Race by Luke
I
was in my well organised garage doing up my Ford Mustang GT, when I heard my
spirit friend Samuel the Spirit telling me to go to the Forest of Skulls (our
world famous race track) to pick up a micro-chip to help me and Samuel
communicate in races. I drove hastily to the luxurious race track.
When I arrived at
the track the sun glistened off of the water droplets that looked as if someone
had set off a bomb of glitter all over my track. I picked up the micro-chip and
slotted it into the secret compartment behind my steering wheel.
I soon retrieved home to find a tremendously
expensive Peugeot RCZ R in my drive. I was stunned to the core. I also was
stunned at the sight of a new garage with all the different colours for
wrapping cars. It was just 2 days until the race and I still wanted to
customize my car there was precisely 36 hours until the big race I was cleaning
my car ready to wrap it in chrome rose gold.
Two hours left.
One hour left.
Now I’m racing to
the track to be there in time for the race.
Beep…beep…beep.
Beeeeeeeepppppppp.
I heard the sound
of my engine; it sounded like a roaring tiger.
Racing like a
cheetah I begin the race.
I started well
with 43 laps and now got 12 laps to go.
My enemy was just
in front of me as we race around the last lap towards the 500 metre straight
road towards the finish line it was now or never as I shift into 7 gear I see
his Audi TT skid into the side and catch fire I brake as hard as I can I help
him out of the flames and I help him into my car so he can finish the race
because it would be unfair to not let himcard finish.
I arrive back home
and get a good night sleep. In the morning I see a really posh looking card at
the front door I open it to see a card from my enemy.
To
Jason,
Thank
you so much for helping me finish the race if not I would have died I hope you
had a great race congratulations for winning.
From
your friend Fredrick
I started writing
back saying thank you for taking your time to write a letter to me and telling
him I would not let anyone suffer. I send it to him and we have lunch at the
track. I told him that I would let him have my old Ford Mustang GT. He thanks
me for my generosity. I drive him to my house to give him my Ford Mustang GT we
organise another race and we become a racing crew.
TO BE CONTINUED…
Barry Budgie: Case 101x by Kyle
It was a
cloudless day in L.A. Barry budgie and his wing man, Jamie, were cruising down
the highway in his Lamborghini when their boss came hurtling over the road.
“Maniac!”
shouted Barry.
Once Barry
and Jamie had got to the top secret agency drain, he hopped into the unsafe
elevator and started going on about how he has to pay a speeding ticket aka a
chocolate bar wrapper.
When Jamie finally
got over Barry’s nagging, they got down to the chrome plated, tech filled hall.
He saw his boss recovering from his crash. He came stumbling over and ordered a
vodka and coke, he’s a heavy drinker; the cause off his crash.
Barry got
given a case and got ordered to solve the case in the next two weeks or he will
get fired. “But I’m you best agent!” said Barry.
But it was
only until he looked at the old crinkled envelope he saw in bold writing, ‘case
101x’.
If you don’t
know, case 101x is the worst crime in the miniature bird world. Why, because in
this devastating case birds of all kinds are murdered by a world known hunter,
Joseph Smith.
After they
had finished moaning, they got into their specially modified Lamborghini hurricane.
They arrived
at the latest crime scene. It was a mess, blood everywhere. All that’s left is
a bony old scabby leg.
Barry turns
on his bright red laser coming from his chrome Lamborghini and starts searching
for clues. They find a hair, finger prints on the leg and also some foot
prints.
They put the
evidence in a clear bag and take it back to base.
Taking the
evidence to Jo, the scientist, they get it scanned to find the culprit and make
sure it was Joseph. Sure enough, it was him and his fully upgraded rifle. They
look up his next location and book a limo for the boss and they go in their Lambo.
There were nearly
there but then, joseph spots them. They do a u turn and hit the accelerator and
weave through the traffic with Joseph close behind. Then Barry remembered Sam
the mechanic had fitted the nitro.
They pressed
hard down on the glimmering red button. Wooosh!
They were
gone before Barry had a chance to blink.
After about
10 minutes of tense driving they finally lost Joseph. They got back to the base
and started making a top secret weapon to defeat joseph which they would set in
3 hours.
3 hours
later they were heading off.
Luckily,
they noticed they had no fuel to power the weapon. They went to the fuel plant
where they had to make a serious deal with the owner.
The owner,
who was a bit nutty, lined up the tanker ready to pipe it through to the
weapon. They eventually got to where joseph was hiding and launched the weapon BOOOOM!!!! That was the end of joseph.
RIP: Joseph
jack Smith.
Bubble and
Squeak in a ninja world by Kayleigh
“Bye” yelled our owner.
Now I am stuck in our cage with my vexing brother Bubble. I
love him dearly but sometimes he is a bit of a bully. The other day when I was
squeaking away to our owner he climbed up to the top of the ladder and stood in
my eye.
“Squeak” yelled Bubble.
“What do you want now king?” I murmured.
I scurried over.
“Look”.
I suddenly noticed that our owner had left the cage open.
“Shall we escape” I wondered
“Well we have always wanted to “replied Bubble
I cautiously clambered out of the cage my long blonde tail
following me.
BANG!!!!
“Squeak Squeak where are you “he questioned
A blue portal appeared it looked a bit like the milky way
“JUMP THROUGH BUBBLE
“I cried
BANG!!
Woah, what is this place
We stared at a sign
nnninja……..wwworld Bubbles stammered he is not a very good
reader!
Walking through a black forest a ninja crept up behind us.
“HAYA “she wailed.
“Hi I am Tiffy your ninja master and do you dare come into my
sensei world?
“Excuse me” I questioned
“Long story short I am a ninja master and do you want me to
be your sensei?”
“OOOO um ok”
“Great lets
get started!”
We ran
through an evil looking forest Tiffy infrount then Bubble. We scampered across
the black woods. Suddenly we came to a hault and an old looking hut stood
before us.
“Come in”
We walked in
and all we could see was black she gave us a black piece of paper and a black
inked pen.
“How are we
ment to write if we can’t see what we are writing?” We questioned.
“Do you dare
question your sensei I have been doing this a lot longer than you I have done
this for 39 years and you have done it for 2 minutes . “
1 hour later we were in the top form and looking for a way
home sensei new the way home but she said it was the final test before we
became level 6 master. The only thing she told us was it was an 8th
brick on a wall. But that wasn’t very helpful because it could be from the top
or bottom or left or right so you can see our dilemma. 10 minutes later we had
checked almost every brick except the 18th row.
Suddenly Bubble pulled down the top brick and the wall
parted, the next thing we know we are in our own cage. I hear the downstairs
door open and footsteps rampaging up the stairs and then a girl comes in all
smart in her school uniform. She opened the cage door and stuck her hand in to
be held I love her but I am still a little cautious with her. But Bubble rushes
over he wanted to show of his moves on her hand but instead it just tickles and
the room is filled with roars of laughter.
The Crazy Life
of A … by Emma
I am in a wrapper in a crazily loud store. I sat there
quietly with my friends dreaming. All of a sudden, we were picked up and taken
to the horrible, noise and bumpy tills.
“BEEEP.” said the screaming till.
“How much will that be ma’am?” said Rude Ralf rudely.
“One pound.” said Miss Ally kindly [the till person].
“AHHHHHH REALLY I’ve only got ninety nine pence!” said Rude
Ralf horribly.
“JUST TAKE THEM!” screamed Miss Ally.
“REALLY!” said Rude Ralf sarcastically.
Rude Ralf runs and take everything in the store AND DID NOT
PAY.
Running back home, he found three little brats called Ed,
Marry and Alex stamping on his garden.
I could see all of his horrible black roses being trampled
on. His grass is as long two inches high. He had bushes as big as a quarter of
a mansion. All of a sudden, he starting speaking and he said.
“Hay you what do you think you and your little brat friends
are doing to my beautiful garden?!” Shouted Rule Ralf.
I was still looking out of the wrapper and the children ran
away like the flash [the superhero] would.
Rude Ralf went in and put me and me and my friends on an old
mouldy table. I screamed in discus because it was stinky and broken down. I watched Ralf slowly disappear into his boring
blue bedroom that was covered in moss.
“I hope we don’t get eaten by that horrid person.” I said
quietly.
“Me to.” Said my friend Freddy
I jumped out and ran around the room and I discovered a
secret mouse hole. I went in and I found an old treasure map. It says in the basement there are lots of
chocolate coins lurking around.
I heard footsteps coming for the living room. Boom boom
boom.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr”
I screamed
I run back screaming like a herd of elephants. I hoped back
into the pack and I was shaking as fast as a cheater and then I felt sick and
then bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbblllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
it was all over me.
Rude Ralph came back in and I screamed.
“I wonder what he is going to do,” whispered my friend Fred.
“I think he’s going to eat us!” I said.
“Really” said Fred in a surprised voice.
“Yes, yes, he’s going to eat us,” said a spooky voice from
behind us.
“Ahhh!,” me and Fred screamed.
He stood next to us as I started to shake even more.
He picked me up and then I was gone, eat. But the big
question is what am I. I am a big, ivory polo and so are my friends to.SSSS
Rave in the Redwoods by Oliver
When four people touch a key in Spaceland they hoped they
are back in the Cinema, but they ended up in a house in the middle of the woods
next to a lake that they had known for 2 years. But at that time it was 1990.
“WHERE ARE WE NOW?!” screamed Sally.
“The real question is! HOW DID WE GET HERE?!” yelled
Pointdexter.
As they were being too loud they alerted the zombies and
that’s when they remembered they kept the Equalizers and the Pack A Punched
NV4. But then there guns disappeared and they only had their fists
“Oh No!” Cried A.J
“What?” Demanded Andre
“Our good guns are gone!” Replied Sally.
Suddenly they heard a voice like…Willard Willer?
“How did you get here?”
The characters can’t speak to Willard Willer but they can
hear him.
When they opened the door they ran to the lake, but got
trapped by the Slasher.
“RUN!” Screamed Pointdexter
They turned around and saw a person what looked like Jason
Voorhees. The movie maker Willard Wyler called him the Slasher.
“Who the woof is that?” questioned Andre while running away
from the Slasher and the 64 zombies. Ready to make them down for bait, for the
others to revive them.
“Where are we going?” Asked A.J
“Just buy the door with your 70,000 cash” Sally told A.J
So that’s what A.J did and then they ran and found
themselves in a wooden old building with a man on in the roof and a projector
on a table on the floor.
They recognised his face.
“Hey that’s Kevin Smith!” Said Andre in a scared sounding
tone.
Then they looked to their left and saw Jason Voorhees (The
Slasher.)
They saw the RPR EVO on a tree whilst running, so they
bought it with their money and carried on running.
They shot and shot at the Slasher until he fell to the
ground,
“Finally. Now when will rave mode run out!” Sally said as
soon as Rave mode ran out.
5 Scene’s later they had turned on the power and they nearly
got taken down by 89 zombies.
Luckily they had Jugernogg, Speed Cola, Double Tap Root Beer
and Quick Revive.
“I’m down help me up please or I will get angry!” Shouted
Andre super loudly
So that’s what Sally did with a card she had, all she did
was squeeze it and poof Andre was up in a matter of seconds with all his perks
and might.
Then the scene ended “how did that happen?” thought all four
of them.
They ran back to spawn to get the bow and arrows when they
got cornered by the beast so they opened the most deadly door at spawn.
With the bow and arrows they sprinted towards the max ammo
then turned to shoot the beast with the bow and arrows.
As the beast fell they picked up another soul key and
teleported into a train in the oldest train station…
SQUEAK by Bethany
Wham!
I heard the sound of the old rickety door slamming shut and the splash of wooden
oars as the five people rowed away from the now silent house on a stack in the vast
desolate ocean.
I started
exploring the people’s rooms where I was never allowed to go because the humans
would catch me and kill me. I also had to be careful of the mouse traps that
they put down, they were there to kill us too. But now the people have gone,
that has changed.
Wow! I’ve
just found the most ancient and towering chest ever. Well, being a mouse
everything was towering, but this really was. I squeezed through the key hole (why
I did this I never will know).
I opened my
eyes only to find I was in a magical dimension. I looked around. I was surrounded
by royal guards! (Oh why was I so inquisitive)? I made a dash for it. Winding
my way through their armoured legs; tripping them up as I went.
Accidently,
I ran into the golden Palace. It had long gleaming hallways, push carpets with
detailed designs, floor length curtains. Up and down, round and round I went
until I found a room . . .
In the morning I found myself in someone’s
hands I looked up. It was the princess. I tried to run away. “Don’t be scared,
I won’t hurt you!” she exclaimed. I stopped. She did look quite nice. One hour later . . .
Winding our
way through tall trees, and getting scared by various sounds like a twig
snapping and rustles here and there. We were on our way to a magical fairy!
As
the tree house came into view, the princess and I heard a deep rasping voice
saying “Have you seen this mouse? He must
be caught! The king has ordered it, for he is vexed by those horrible mice.”
The princess recognised the voice it was a royal Guard. “Are you sure you don’t
know anything.” He pushed.
“Sure,”
came the tinkling voice of the fairy.
Finally the
Guard left because the fairy wouldn’t tell him anything, let alone that I was
coming to her house to be sent back to my own dimension. Accidently the
princess fell and snapped a twig so he turned his head so he saw us. He ran to
alert the king.
Meanwhile we ran into the fairy’s tree house.
And as quick as a flash, she saved me by sending my home through a portal she
summoned up.
James Pong by Georgia
James Pong is a stray cat who lives
in a dark and gloomy ally way in London. When he was a kitten he was exploring
a bin when someone found his mum and brothers and sisters and took them to a
rescue centre and he got left behind to defend for himself.
Now he steals food from restaurants
and cafes and lives in the very same ally way he got
left in.
One night he woke up to the sound of
his belly rumbling so he decided to get some think to eat but there was one
problem every were was closed but then he spotted a glistening light in the
distance so he set of into the night wondering what to eat.
When he got there he saw a massive
silver gate he slid through a thin gap he walked up the path when all of a
sudden he was up the tree with corgis barking from beneath him fortunately the
guards came over and took them away.
So James Pong set of to find a way
in.
After about 5 minuets he finally
found an entrance round the back of the large building but as soon as he was
about to go in the corgis came back rushing out from the door so he retreated
and fell and fell into a drain SWOSH
SPLASH DRIP he ended up in the sewers he smelt a whiff of fish so he decided to
follow the scent and of curse he was totally used to the sewers that’s why he’s
called James Pong.
When he got to the end of the scent
he came to a small pipe he squeezed in side and slid up it eventually he saw a
glint of light he scurried out and got dazzled by a bright light “yuck” said
James “that is a disgusting pong” he flopped out the toilet and shacked all the
water of. There was white and soap and things like that every where.
There was a creak behind the door
then it flung open “what a earth is that pong” said the wrinkly old lady as she
picked up James and put him in the bath tub “what are you doing here” she said,
turned on the taps and James stated to enjoy it he got taken out and put into a
white fluffy towel and brought him down the stairs she put him down with a bowl
of fish, he finally found a home.
Jake's Revenge by Harley
Jake was eating
his lunch. Then, the boss bully came over and said “That looks disgusting, how
can you eat that?”
“Leave me alone, go and annoy John,” replied
Jake.
“No still
you,” said the Fat One.(The Boss bully.)
Jake grabbed his plate full of food and
chucked it in the Fat One’s face and ran for it. The Fat One in anger said, “I’m
going to grab his pimple head and pull it off and then play football with it!”
Jake ran
into the music room but knocked the cymbal over. Hearing the crash, the bullies
noticed him and entered. As a bully came towards Jake, he ran back, but couldn’t,
as another bully was behind him.
The two
bullies grabbed Jake. Then, the Fat One came in.
“You really
thought that you could get away, from me,” said the Fat One.
“Actually,
I’m a bit smarter than all of you combined, so, yes I thought I could get
away,” replied Jake happy.
“You may be
smarter, but, you’re not stronger,” said the Fat One.
“I don’t
need to be stronger than you, plus you’re not strong, you’re fat, isn’t that
why your called the Fat One,” replied Jake cockily.
“Being fat
is good, because you don’t get hurt,” replied the Fat One.
“Prove it
then,” said Jake excited.
“You really
want to fight…. me…. now,” replied the Fat One waiting for an answer.
“Yes,”
replied Jake realising that he was in the music room.
The Fat One
charged at Jake, but Jake dived under the table like a jumping cat when it’s
scared.
Jake noticed
that the cymbal was next to him. He grabbed the cymbal as the bullies were on
the ground. Then the Fat One got up, and looked at Jake he had a suspicion that
Jake was up to something, as Jake’s hands were behind his back.
Then….. CRASH!!!!!
Jake had hit
the Fat One in the face with the cymbal. Whilst the Fat One was on the floor
the other bullies tried to get the cymbal off of Jake but, as Jake was smarter
than the bullies, the same thing happened to them.
Jake wanted
to have a bit of fun with them.
As the Fat
One and the other bullies were still vibrating.
Jake started
to play Mozart with the bullies heads on the keyboard.
Then Jake
remembered that he had something in his locker for this precise moment. He ran until
he made it to his locker, the bullies followed him.
“What is the
most scariest thing ever?” asked Jake.
“A… err…
well a… RAT!” replied the bullies scared.
“Well lucky
for you I have a DEAD RAT here in my locker,” replied Jake opening his locker.
“AAHHH, run
away!!!” screamed the Fat One.
Jake was laughing
so hard he nearly fainted. As the bullies ran away Jake felt great. He heard
the Fat One scream “I NEED MY MOMMY!!”
Nigel The Rainbow Narwhal by Eleanor
Nigel was born…different. He’s not like any other narwhal
because he has a rare condition called rainbowskinitis the only three animals
who accept him are his mum and his two best friends Perry the penguin and Frank
the ultra rare sausage dog.
Frank is ultra rare
because most sausage dogs live on land but Frank has gills and flippers so he
lives underwater with his mum ,dad and his hundreds of brothers and sisters on
the outskirts of Narwich.
Nigel heard a knock at the door, he opened it and saw Perry
and Frank with a shrimp cake (his favourite) they started singing the happy
birthday song , Nigel forgot it was his birthday!
Perry handed him a ticket to Aquafest (the greatest festival
in the world) Nigel was speechless! He looked closer and saw that they were
V.I.N (very important narwhal tickets!)
“I can’t believe we’re here!” shouted Nigel over the music
“I know!” Frank shouted back to him.
“Lets go see Rag’n’bonarwhal!” screamed Perry.
They went backstage to see him before his gig Nigel
explained that other narwhals tease him and Rag’n’bonarwhal said to ignor the
haters, enjoy life to the fullest and be yourself!
The great golden
quest by Henry
DAY 1
Thud, smash
I am down on my knees picking up each shard of vintage vase. With the glue in
my hand, I hear the ominous sound of a shotgun cocking. Feeling the cold metal
on the back of my head I ran for the window. Jumping through I landed in a bin.
I couldn’t be bothered to get out so I just rolled to my secret hideout, a
blanket in the middle of an alleyway.
DAY 2
Thud,
wobble, wobble. Quickly stopping the gold bars from falling (I didn’t know they
were gold bars at the time) I desperately needed the toilet but had forgotten
to bring my torch. So I have to feel my way instead. Wall, wall, wire, wall,
something round shaped like a toilet. Ready to relive myself I heard a barking
sound that made me freeze. Suddenly I felt a biting sensation on my leg.
Holding in the pain I turned on the light too see a baby, its jaws sinking into
his flesh. I still really needed the toilet so I gave up.
DAY 3
Ow, hop, hop, thump, smash. Its pitch black because yet again
I’ve forgotten my torch. So feeling my way I find a switch. Pressing it red
disco lights came on and a song, so I start dancing (obviously) then one
direction comes on. Screaming I run out of the front door.
DAY 4
This is the day…that I succeed…at bringing my torch…and get
my new bathroom. I’m so excited that I lift of my shirt and swing it round like
a whip that a cowboy would use in the Wild West. I put my shirt back on and
pulled out my torch I flicked the switch but nothing happen. I flick it again
and again still nothing happens. I take of the back and there are no batteries.
“Right I’ve had enough,” I threw the torch on the floor but the hard steel hit
my foot. “OW,OW,OWW!” I wailed. Right I’ve had enough. I’m gonna take anything
that feels like gold or gold wire. Bar, bar, wire, bar, wire. ‘wooooooowooooooowoooowoooooooo.’
“oh no the fuzzy bears.” I make a
run for it. Jumping onto the window sill, I see the poo poo down below. The
only way out is along the power line. Walking across the long wire I hear a
snap and a crack and the power line tumbles to the ground. I get thrown into a
police car and taken to the courtyard. I am sentenced to 10 years in Rikers
prison for attempted theft of bars of soap and dental floss. Wait what?
The King's perfect
meal by William
“IT’S MY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!” exclaimed the king excitedly,
stretching his eight legs. He jumps out of his bed, grabs his towel and strolls
to the bathroom.
He hangs his towel up on the royal hook and scrambles into
the running shower. He starts to sing happy birthday to me…
When the king finished his shower he grabs his towel, wraps
it around him and goes to his room.
The king opens his closet and choses a red robe, he puts it
on and then goes to his crown closet. The king shouts “Dramatic music!” the trumpet
sounds D-D-D-D-DO. He switches a beaming light on behind the crown, and says
“This is more like it,” Then he shoves his important crown on and shouts “Now
I’m ready for my birthday!”
The king opened his door knowing his butler would be waiting,
but for once he wasn’t. The king says “OH GOSH!” Where’s my butler? I’ll go and
look downstairs and see if he’s there.
The king rushed downstairs and he couldn’t see anyone, he
started worrying. Then “SURPRISE!” The king jumped out of his skin whilst
everyone partied.
The king saw all his friends, the other royal daddy longlegs
and his woodlice army. Then he saw someone he hadn’t met before, an ordinary
spider. Why has she been invited? He thought. The king was interrupted by the
spider and she blurted out “Would you like to go out on a date with me?” The
king replied with
“It’s a deal,” And
went off.
The king went pale and his friend rushed over to him and
said “What’s wrong with you?” the king replied
“I need to know how to
go on a date?”
“Just wing it, that’s what I always do” said the king’s
friend who walked off and muttered “That’s why I’m not married,” luckily the
king didn’t hear.
Ring, ring. The king answered his phone “Hello.” The person
on the other end of the phone said “meet me at the drawbridge of the castle at
6pm” so the king did. On the way the king was wondering who the mystery phone
caller was and then he saw the spider from his party. They drove to the bug hotel
and scurried into the hotel reception room. The king said
“I order you to bring
me fat flies and a long worm for a bench. Also bring slugs, rinse them out into
two cups or else your head will be chopped off and fed to a slobber monster”
(which in our world is a dog.)
They sat on the worm enjoying the flies. When they had
finished, the receptionist suggested that next time you should go to a
restaurant, the king thought this was much more fun! The king said to the
spider “that was a lovely date, I wish we could do it again but sadly I’m still
hungry so please can you be my dessert?” The king devoured the spider and then
cheerfully said
“I love dates they’re
perfect for my belly” and the king and his belly lived in paradise but it was
another story for his beloved girlfriends.
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